Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? To what extent you agree?

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Some people around the education trust that starting to study a foreign
language
for pupils at primary school is a good idea.
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essay will argue that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In my view, someone who began to learn
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earlier can easily
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in the future and confusion with their
first
tongue, is not valid. There is
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that it causes the child to become bad at
first
language
or even to confuse both languages.
Nevertheless
, there is no evidence to support
this
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For instance
kids from bilingual families
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to outperform in their mother tongue and the other
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early is that increase vocabulary range and speaking fluency in adulthood. There will be
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far more years to get perfect vocabulary skills and advanced speech in both languages.
For example
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IELTS band 5 or 5.5. It causes when Kazakhstan reduced the additional
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at primary school. In conclusion, there are many several facts
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that the advantages clearly outweigh the disadvantage when child bad at mother tongue and
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when it is getting difficult to learn bilingually.
Submitted by Mezun 2023 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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