The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The below chart illustrated buying and renting accommodation percentage of
households
in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
, the percentage of people living in England and Wales who used to live in rent
Replace the word
rented
households
decreased with the
respect Correct article usage
apply
of
time. Change preposition
to
In contrast
, The rate of people buying their own house increased within the given time duration. Moreover
, the
1971 was the year when both types of Change the article
apply
residential
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the residential
population
were equal.
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populations
To begin
with, more than 75% of households
settled in rented living quarters in 1918 and it
was the highest rate in the whole period. Correct pronoun usage
which
However
, the percent
steadily decreased from 78% in 1918 to 59% in 1961 Replace the word
percentage
then
dropped drastically until 2001 and remained just
over 30%. The figure Change preposition
at just
also
showed a gradual increased
in 2011 which is around 36%.
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increase
On the other hand
, households
in the owned accommodation were not popular taking around 22% in 1918. Nevertheless
, the figure rose with fluctuation and reached its peak in the year 2001 just
below 70%. Change preposition
at just
Afterward
, the popularity of Change the spelling
Afterwards
households
in owned house
fall slightly by 5% in 2011.Fix the agreement mistake
houses
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