Some people think all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Making a choice for the university
subjects
between the
field
in which a student keeps their interest or based on a
future
perspective is a hot topic among many people. Some consider that adolescents should choose
the
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certain important
subjects
in the graduation curriculum
such
as science or
technology related
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subjects
which could be beneficial in the
future
. I believe that
students
should be free of
this
restriction and allowed to choose the
subjects
they are intended to learn.
On the other hand
, some would argue that a university education is very important for the
students
so they should choose only those
subjects
which are in high demand. They support their view with the argument that
this
could be helpful for their career in the
future
in many ways.
For example
, as per the latest study, those are graduated from the London University in Science and Information Technology
field
,
they
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are offered high pay scale
job
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by
the
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highly prestigious companies.
Thus
,
students
will have
successful
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career
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ahead and they can
fulfill
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their
all the
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wishes. As far as I can see, the
students
should allow
to decide
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what kind of subject they are interested in because
this
could be helpful for them to do their best.
Also
,
this
could be beneficial to improve their skill
on
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that particular
field
where they are keen
to
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.
For instance
, recently a report has been published by the London Press and it shows that those pupils choose the postgraduation course based on their interest, they perform much better than other
students
those attend the same course but without great curiosity.
Moreover
,
report
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says that these kinds of
students
earn
big
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amount of money because they are skilled, and they are professional in their
field
. In conclusion,
although
there is
great
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possibility of
prosperous
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future
having
study
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with
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science and technology related
subject
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subjects
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, I believe that
student
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students
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do well in their curriculum and after graduation
whose
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they
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choose the subject on basis of their interest.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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