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Nowadays, it seems that people tend to waste a great amount of food. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

#people #waste #amount #food
The provided
two
 bar diagrams compare information for
two
 different countries in 2010 in terms of spending money on various household services. Overall, a glance at the graph
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revels
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 that the main percentage difference between Japan and Malaysia
lied
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on
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 housing and
transport
 expenditures as opposed to the rest of things,
such
 as food, health care and other goods and services with negligent differences in
portion
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. In terms of the most significant feature of the graph, in Japan, housing and
transport
 accounted for just over
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two fifths
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 collectively. When viewed separately, housing comprised 21 per cent, whereas
transport
 expenses constituted exactly a fifth. With regards to Malaysia,
transport
 and housing made up 10 and 34
percent
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 respectively. On the whole, these
two
 expenditures accounted for nearly 41 per cent in
the
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both countries. In stark contrast, the remaining
stuffs
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 witnessed roughly the same fractions in both countries in 2010. As it is seen, they vary by 3
percent
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 from each other.
For instance
, food expenditures in Japan made up 24%,
meanwhile
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 in the
second
country
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 it occupied a little more, 27
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.
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