In order to solve traffic problems, the government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transport. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

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problems are usually found in every
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. Some
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suggest the
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increase the tax on private
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car
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as well as improve
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apply
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public
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. It does clearly have both advantages and disadvantages of the solution. Every way
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improving the problem always has both advantages and disadvantages, including
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improvement. For the benefit of a solution, the number of cars would be decreased because the
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who have low income would rarely buy the private
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while they would use public
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such
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as the bus increasingly. And the
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would be able to control the
traffic
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problem easier than before because the customer
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public
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would be higher.
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which attracts
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to use public
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because the
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make public
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the
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priority.
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disadvantages of a solution, it is related to the economy of the
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.
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, the distributors of the
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need to avoid their investment in the
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then
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the
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would be
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a non-attractive
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investment.
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, all vehicles are hard to be repaired when they are broken. Because of the non-attractive
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investment
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,
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resources are rarely found and when the public transports have
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problems, the
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would need to use a higher budget than before. In conclusion, increasing the tax
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private
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car
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and improving
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public
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also
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have it. The
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is able to fix the
traffic
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problem but make the economy even worst. The
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should
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the
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consult with the consultants or parliament and they need to keep stock of the benefit of their
people
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before doing something.
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