In order to solve traffic problems, the government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transport. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

The
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traffic
problems are usually found in every
country
. Some
people
suggest the
government
increase the tax on private
car
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cars
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as well as improve
the
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apply
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public
transport
. It does clearly have both advantages and disadvantages of the solution. Every way
for
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of
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improving the problem always has both advantages and disadvantages, including
the
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apply
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traffic
improvement. For the benefit of a solution, the number of cars would be decreased because the
people
who have low income would rarely buy the private
car
while they would use public
transports
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transport
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such
as the bus increasingly. And the
government
would be able to control the
traffic
problem easier than before because the customer
of
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for
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the
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public
transport
would be higher.
For example
, Japan is one of the
country
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countries
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which attracts
people
to use public
transport
because the
government
make public
transport
the
first
priority.
For the
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disadvantages of a solution, it is related to the economy of the
country
.
Firstly
, the distributors of the
car
need to avoid their investment in the
country
then
the
country
would be
non-attractive
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a non-attractive
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car
investment.
Secondly
, all vehicles are hard to be repaired when they are broken. Because of the non-attractive
car
investment
country
,
car
resources are rarely found and when the public transports have
the
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problems, the
government
would need to use a higher budget than before. In conclusion, increasing the tax
of
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on
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private
car
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cars
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and improving
the
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apply
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public
transport
also
have it. The
government
is able to fix the
traffic
problem but make the economy even worst. The
government
should
have
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the
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consult with the consultants or parliament and they need to keep stock of the benefit of their
people
before doing something.
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