Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals . Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Over the

last

few decades, there have remarkable environmental issues been identified by many. Some people believe that the most important

issue

in

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present is losing

existence

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the existence

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of specific vegetation and animal creatures. As far as I can see, there are many other issues which are more dangerous to our

environment

compared to the latter

issue

.

On the other hand

. Some people would argue that

endanger

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species of

plant

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plants

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and

animal

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animals

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may cause

devastating

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a devastating

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impact on the

environment

. They support their view with a claim that

this

could

causes

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the

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disturbance in the

eco-system

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ecosystem

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of the earth.

For instance

,

recent

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study says that there is a decline in the production of wheat over

last

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few years which may create unbalance in supply and demand

amongst

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many countries.

Moreover

,

latest

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scientific study shows that due to overfishing activity,

the

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marine life has been facing catastrophic

effect

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effects

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and some

of

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apply

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sea

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the sea

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species are at the edge of their extinction.

This

could cause

devastating

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a devastating

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impact on the

eco system

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ecosystem

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. As far

I

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as I

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can see the important factor of current environmental

issue

is climate change and carbon emission. The main

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root cause

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root-cause

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root cause

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of

this

phenomenon is industrialization in

the

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many countries. Because of

this

advancement, the

environment

has to pay in the way of bearing pollution which is mainly caused by these factories. To illustrate

this

issue

, as per the recent report of deposit of carbon in the air has been gained significantly and

this

is mainly due to giant factories and manufacturing plants which

produces

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harmful gases as a

by-product

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byproduct

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of fossil fuel consumption.

As a result

, the

environment

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is damages

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damages

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in

irreversible

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an irreversible

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way which is more crucial

from

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the nature. In conclusion,

although

there are many plant and animal creatures

are

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under threat of existence which is one of the serious environmental issues, in my view, carbon

emission

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emissions

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due to

industrial

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the industrial

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revolution

have

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higher

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potential to harm the

environment

which can be irreversible damage.