Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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families are increasing in number. For

this

reason, it is important to consider who can take care of

children

. People have two different

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view,

grandparents

play

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in

children

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upbringing, while others think that nursery schools

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the best choice. I partially agree with

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. There

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large

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number of families which have

both

parents

working. In order not to remain uncontrolled,

children

are taken care of by other family members,

such

as

grandparents

. Actually, these

both

are thrifty and safer because

parents

rely on family members.

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,

this

creates

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of comfortable

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parents

.

Secondly

, it is irrefutable that being

care

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grandparents

enable

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children

to learn their family tradition nearer.

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result

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being informed about their previous generation and

family

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activities will help them to keep

alive

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family culture. Some

parents

believe that

grandparents

don't have adequate experience to look after

children

, even some of them are physically feeble and inactive,

hence

parents

have sufficient reason to put their

children

in childcare

centers

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. Actually, one of the main advantages of nursery

school

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is that they have trained staff who have enough practical ability to grow a child.

Furthermore

, childcare

centers

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offer

entertaining

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which comes interesting to

children

.

Moreover

,

by

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spending time with

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another child

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children

gives an opportunity to improve their communication

skill

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. To conclude,

both

of them are up to the

parents

and family

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.

Although

how much

grandparents

are safer for

children

, childcare

centers

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have professional

team

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and

to be

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looked after by experts will be beneficial for them to adapt

society

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easily in the future.