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In spite of the advances in medicine, many people around the world still die of easily preventable diseases. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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In recent years, medicine has progressed enormously,
still
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 the highest death rate is related to preventable
diseases
.
This
 essay will examine the main causes of these problems and possible solutions.
To begin
, researches show most of these preventable
diseases
 are multifactorial. means, the onset and progression of these
diseases
 depend on several factors
such
 as genetics and lifestyle. In recent decades people’s lifestyles have changed to processed and fast food and sedentary lifestyle.
For example
, nowadays in USA cardiovascular disease is o0ne of the most important reasons for people’s death.
That is
 associated with genetics , stress and the kind of nutrition and activity rate of people.
Although
 obviously the role of genetics cannot be changed. But health sector s can promote people’s knowledge and culture about having healthy nutrition and doing daily and regular exercises.
Moreover
, stress management techniques could be taught to people. To conclude, to prevent most preventable and chronic
diseases
 prevention medicine plays an essential role.
Thus
 by promoting awareness among people about the proper lifestyle we can see a significant decrease in the death of these
diseases
.
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