The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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In today’s era, Technological Intervention is being witnessed in almost all sectors due to its advancements. In earlier times, people would prefer to communicate with each other in person but nowadays, the use of social
media
applications
such
as Facebook, and Twitter is being considered a method of communication. In my opinion,
this
practice has more disadvantages than advantages. Starting with, though social
media
applications are proving to be advantageous in situations where having direct communication seems to be impossible, considering them as the only source of communication is having an adverse impact on human relationships. Human Beings are spending a considerable amount of their time posting pictures, and making videos because of which they are left with limited time wherein it is unlikely for them to have some direct interactions.
For example
, according to a recent study, couples spending more time on social
media
apps are likely to get in more fights resulting in higher divorce rates.
Therefore
, communicating digitally or not all affects human bonds to a great extent.
Furthermore
, it is undeniable that social
media
platforms help in solving some serious crimes, thereby, proving to be a blessing for crime investigators and the police force but they are
also
a root of some serious issues
such
as web hacking. Recent crime reports witnessed that most of the murderers took a hacker’s assistance in getting the whereabouts of their target.
Hence
, usage of social
media
applications is not guaranteeing the security and privacy of an individual’s account. In conclusion,
although
being active on social
media
comes with a series of benefits, the rise in crime rates and weakening of bonds between family members, couples are highly likely to be owned to the social
media
platforms
such
as Facebook and Twitter.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enhanced connectivity
  • geographical barriers
  • maintaining relationships
  • valuable tool
  • staying informed
  • global issues
  • current events
  • niche topics
  • professional networking
  • career growth
  • business opportunities
  • mental health challenges
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • feelings of loneliness
  • over-reliance
  • face-to-face interactions
  • social skills
  • emotional intelligence
  • privacy concerns
  • data security
  • personal information
  • accessed and misused
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