A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trus, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagre with this opinion?

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Nowadays, Social media plays a vital role in

this

modern era. Some communities believe that

people

are getting value based on their social

status

and financial

status

while some other communities argue with

this

matter and they think that Old-fashioned values

also

play a vital role for an individual. In

this

essay, I will discuss both scenarios and

then

I will give my opinion on

this

matter. On the one side, In

this

materialistic era, most

people

are giving priority to social

status

and financial

status

People

are getting treated based on their wealth in recent times. Even a person with bad behaviour is getting treated well because of his/her financial

status

or he/she is from a famous family.

For Example

, A hero's son is

also

becoming a hero in the film industry even though he doesn't know the acting due to the hero's financial

status

and fame. On the other side, Old-fashioned values have their importance too. Being kind to others, respecting elders, and being true to others

also

have great value in some societies. Being true to others is more important compared to being wealthy.

For instance

, A person with old-fashioned valued like, honour, kindness, etc. is treated in a great way compared to a person with financial

status

. To sum up, I think, in

this

modern and materialistic era most

people

are given more importance nowadays meanwhile old-fashioned values

also

have their own importance in

this

society.

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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trus, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagre with this opinion?

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