Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past.what are the caurses and solutions of this problem

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Nowadays , the young generation is going into the dark side and
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they lost their diamond as a culture .
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, they become an aggressive and disrespectful person so
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of all, the main reason is that technology because they use
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kind of activity which do not give knowledge and information ,
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, today's generation is wasting their golden time on the devices and
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uses some dark website
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help them to make a person into the devil,
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they are lost their rights which gave from their parents.
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, the film sector
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has some contribution to
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problem because they show some advanced level scenes in the movie
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some films that were banned in the country because of their script so that they cannot spread dirt in it.
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, Here is a solution for the above problems foremost is that guardians should take care of a child that what are they doing ? ,
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, you should say that you must do study
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you will do any kind of activities.
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, the law should give the notice to remove the scene
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we should Ban it as some films are not allowed to show minor people,
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it cannot negatively impact
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them. In conclusion , people should wake up and try to solve
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problem because children are tomorrow's main so the government
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must take a decision about it.
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