Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The line graph compares four different countries, namely
Japan
,
Poland
, Greece and New
Zealand
, in terms of annual average wage at four countries showed an upward trend during
this
24 years period. New
Zealand
and
Poland
could see considerable increases, while
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in New
Zealand
and
Poland
.
Poland
dramatically increased from nearly 15000$ in 1995 to slightly over double that figure in 2019.
This
country surpassed
Japan
's annual average wages between 2015 and 2019, at nearly 28000$. A similar upward trend could be seen in
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.
This
country's figure grew by almost 13000$ during 24 years period.
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in 2007, at nearly 35000$, after which a considerable decline could be seen for the remaining 12 years recorded.
Likewise
, Greece stagnated during
this
period and was surpassed by New
Zealand
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