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It is better to learn English from a non-native English speaker in your own country. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays we can learn
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 from anywhere in the world. People have a choice of how, with whom, where and when to learn
English
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. Many are inclined to
teachers
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 who speak
two
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languages
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 for faster learning, and many choose
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 for whom
English
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 is their native
language
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. Every
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 has their own positive and negative ways of learning. A
teacher
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 who speaks
two
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 can
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 information much easier and faster and
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English
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 can provide you with more information. Knowledge of
two
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 always simplifies the learning process. In any
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 there are certain rules that are sometimes easier to explain in
native
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. Non-native
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 can give a more accurate and understandable translation without replacing words with synonyms. One of the dubious advantages is
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 can speak with an accent, which is closer to the manner of speech of the native
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. Not always an explanation of the
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language
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 gives a correct understanding of a word.
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, for the initial study of
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, it will be more correct to study with a
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 who knows his native
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, basic knowledge will be easier to understand when you are explained in your own
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.
On the other hand
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, a
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 who has
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 as his native
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 can know and understand much more than
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 who speak
two
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languages
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. He can know the exact and correct meaning of most idioms, which is a huge plus in learning
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. correct pronunciation and clear speech that does not have an accent, which helps to speak correctly right away.
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,
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 a
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 can tell much more about the culture, peculiar slangs and local expressions that are not written in textbooks. In conclusion, it is better to try training with different
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 who will be able to give you a lot of necessary information. In my opinion, a
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 much easier to transfer knowledge than a native
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teacher
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. Everything depends solely on the purpose of learning
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 and the convenience of the student.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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