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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negetive development?

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There is no doubt that
technology
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 and its improvements in the previous decades have made
impacts
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 on
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human's
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 interaction with each other.
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 has positive and negative effects. The following essay will discuss the manners of
relationships
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 being
chaned
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changed
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technology
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 and its good and bad consequences. Since the great invention of Alexander Graham Bell, the telephone, There have been constant changes in
relationships
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, education and, social life.
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 helped
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 to talk to each other from long distances which led to its popularity.
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, many
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 meetings in a single day were replaced by phone calls, and
people
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 tend to talk to each other on phone rather than
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 each other. After
heyday
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 of
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the telephone's
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telephone's
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usage
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 both scientists' courage to develop communication technologies and
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the world
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 wide web's progress formed new
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 as emails, short text message services, and
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internet-based
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internet based
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 messengers that altered
relationships
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 by far. Nowadays, it is very common to interact with others using mobiles. On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. When there is a great distance between two
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 is the easiest way to communicate by using
technology
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. Affordable expenses of new era's ways of interaction is another benefit of
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 techs.
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 negative point is that
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 developments may lead to loneliness.
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 will meet each other less than before
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 and will be more isolated each day.
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, texts and emails may cause misinterpretations which is a result of
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 of tone in written messages. To sum up,
technology
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 has certainly changed
the
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relationships
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, and
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have
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 caused positive and
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negative
negetive
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negative
 results.
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