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It is better to learn English from a non-native English speaker in your own country. To what extend do you agree?

For decades, In Asian
schools
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 You will be able to see many non-native
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teachers
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 teaching several students. I was
also
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 one of those students. But if asked about the quality of teaching, it would probably be not as good as it should be. So
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 the reason why I totally disagree with
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 opinion and prefer that any government try to provide native-
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 speakers to be
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 of all, it's an advantage when
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 with a teacher who knows the nature and culture of using
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. Because those
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 were born and raised with
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 as a part of their lives.
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 makes it easier to understand
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 as you get a better understanding of the context of its use.
On the other
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 it is true that if we study with a teacher who can interpret the meaning of
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 for us to understand
in
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our language. It's better and easier than learning and interpreting
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. Even Though we will not be able to fully understand the true meaning.
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, if you have to study with a teacher who is not a native speaker,how confident can
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 be with correct pronunciation? or the correct usage
.
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 Because each nation has a unique way of pronouncing different
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words
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 may change the meaning of
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 as well. All in all, I don't agree with learning
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 with non-native
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teachers
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. Because it may lead to misunderstanding of the use of
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 in the context. And it has a direct effect on the practice of pronunciation of various
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