Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the reals need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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We are living in a world where newspapers,magazines,television and social media are flooded with advertisements for famous customer items. Ads boost the sales and profits of

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items.It,

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,does not meet the needs of the consumer market in which they are sold.I completely agree with the above statement and will provide supporting arguments for the same down here.

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with,advertising agencies hire renowned public figures

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as sports person and movie stars as the promoter of their products.Adding these people's names to the brand helps them improve the image of the selling items.It draws the attention of the fans and brings reliability and confidence to their product.

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,if a fitness enthusiast and actor promotes a protein product,people will blindly put their trust in that good and buy it even if they do not need it.

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way,it helps the product seller to earn brand value and profit in the name of famous personalities. Another trick they use is by providing huge offers and discounts and by launching lucrative sales.These are ,in fact, the clearance sales in which they lure the public with attractive offers

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as 'Buy 1 ,get 3' or 'flat 50% discount'. They mislead people by tagging the MRP to be double and

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providing 50% off on that amount. To

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illustrate, a person in need of 1 shirt will buy 3 shirts

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of 1 thinking that he is getting 3 shirts at the cost of 1. The reality is that the price of 1 commodity is either equivalent to or greater than the price of 3.

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is how companies are able to sell their products at high prices and fool their clients. In my opinion,with the help of advertising tools, sellers of popular goods blossom immensely with huge margins but seldom do they meet the requirement of the users.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

305 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumer behavior
perceived needs
emotional appeal
brand image
marketing strategies
materialistic values
consumerism
manipulative tactics
endorsements
celebrity marketing
promotional tools
status symbols
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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the reals need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Include an introduction and conclusion

It is arguable that some proponents believe that domestic waste is not recycled properly and they want the government to take actions in order to encourage people to recycle more.

Many employers find that their new employees lack sufficient interpersonal skills such as lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes? Can you suggest some possible solutions?

it is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (dinosaur,dodo), there is no reason why people should try to prevent thid form happening.

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Recommend the best time of year to visit and why •Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose – •Say what you would like to show your friend in your country