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In many parts of the world, it is common for one parent to stay at home and raise a new born child while other works full time to earn money. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The upbringing of a newborn
child
 requires a lot of effort and time from
parents
. Nowadays both husband and wife started earning for future endeavours,
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Moreover
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 they are contributing equally in order to run their house ,
However
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being
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the availability of caretakers, there are some parts of the world where a newborn
child
 raised by
one
 of the
parents
 and the other
one
 earns their living.
This
 essay will discuss how the advantages overtake the disadvantages. On the
one
 hand, the early stages of an infant are considered very crucial. At
this
 ,
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stage they develop their body parts and learn everything. And for that
parents
 can only be the ones who can groom their children by taking care of their health and other necessities. For ,example nutritional value of a
child
's meal must be appropriate, as the body and most of its organs require nutrition to develop appropriately.
Furthermore
, the newborn learns what they actually saw and try to mimic and grasp each and everything they observe.
Parents
 should always stay around their babies so that they will be able to teach them their values, ethics and morals. In the conclusion,
parents
 play various roles in the life of their
child
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, teachers, etc. And if they want that their
child
 would be able to learn and grow in a healthy way,
one
 of them should be there with the newborn.
Hence
 its advantages outweigh its disadvantages
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