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More and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause for libraries?

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In recent days, the difference between paper
books
 and e-
books
 has become a debatable issue. It is argued that society selected to read electronic
books
 rather than ordinary
books
. Lately, on the internet started to appear electronic versions and for
this
 inventors created an e-book as tablets. The public, after, creation is buying
this
 new technology.
This
 essay will discuss the causes of
this
 problem.
To begin
 with, the convenience of
this
 innovation. In the majority of ,cases we read
books
 during the travel exactly
then
 when we go on the long journey. And at
this
 time e-
books
 are more appropriate than heavy paper. Readers are produced in small sizes, they weigh quite a little and they are convenient to carry in a bag. The
second
 reason why people buy electronic format is the cost of a book. Nowadays, on the internet, we have many sites for downloading
books
 and often these
books
 are free. Readers download
books
 in
this
 way.
Therefore
, the advantages of an e-book are more than ordinary
books
. If compactness and price are important to you. Since the emergence of screen format reading, some people stopped visiting libraries. Put more simply, the library visitors started studying and reading at home, downloading materials on their own technology. It can influence detrimentally the development of the country's education.Because the library will stop making money and can not buy new
books
. In conclusion, I am advising the public that you must visit libraries and study with paper
books
. In my opinion, the printed version is better remembered and generally perceived by the reader. You can use e-
books
 only in necessary situations. We should get only advantages from everything.
Submitted by Mezun 2023 on

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