Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

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are having far more impact on our personality and development than

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that may occur in life. In my point of view, I believe that the role of our

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with the

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which people had since they were born are usually difficult to change throughout their life. Due to the early form of these

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in our gen by previous generations, they can be considered to be permanent and it seems that it is rare for them to be changed. For

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would be the major responsibility for creating

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and

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would affect the later developments and choices.

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can influence the personality as well as the developments, most of these

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are usually still less significant than the

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, unless some special

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. The

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are following individuals for a long period, even from when they were born to the time when they

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no longer existed, while some

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just happened in a short term.

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, the effect of

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of their

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. All in all, our

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are created from generation to generation and they existed with people

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their lives. From that, I trust that

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have a more major influence.

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Topic Vocabulary:

nature vs. nurture debate
genetic inheritance
personality traits
behavior patterns
heritability
twins studies
malleable characteristics
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language acquisition
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innate traits
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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Fully explain your ideas

Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that sports teach children how to compete. Others feel that children can learn team work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that to benefit the development of a child, the mother and father should take parenting classes. To what extent you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people today are not as fit and active as people used to be in the past and this is a danger to their long-term health. What do you think are the reasons for this ? What measures can you suggest to reduce this problem ?