successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, many

sports

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professionals earn a great deal of money, even more than those specializing in other fields. Some

people

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consider that it is reasonable, but in my opinion, I will argue with its unfairness.

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with, most high incomes of

sports

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experts are not given by their skills or jobs but are related to their values on social media. To some extent, they are

stars

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that is

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sports

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stars

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People

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are more likely to pay for news about their love relationships, family members, and scandals than their

sports

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games.

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, now most

people

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would like to know about Kobe’s wife and daughter

instead

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of the competitions he attended when he was still alive. In

this

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way,

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stars

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can have more fans, which means they can make more bread on the internet.

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, some

people

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may say that

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experts always need to take part in many important games to fight for their countries, and it is so hard for them that they deserve higher pay.

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, there are more individuals working hard in other areas. Doctors,

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, are always busy saving

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’s lives.

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, scientists do their research day and night, to foster the development of our world, and always threatened by unknown substances which can cause their deaths. These specialists are worth being paid higher, but they remain to get common salaries. In conclusion, it is unfair for

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superstars to gain so much money, but heroes in other fields are often ignored by the public. The wealth coming to those

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should be transformed into

people

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devoting themselves to other significant professions.

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