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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the reals need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays, a section of society holds a belief that decent advertising will promote the high sales of consumer goods, albeit the goods are not
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necessities for folks but more to their desires.
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my perspective regarding
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 issue. To commence with,
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 are most likely easier to be attracted
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 trending
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 that have viral via social media, as well as on the internet. Undoubtedly, some companies spot these opportunities to promote their
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 based on folks' preferences. Recent news by "BBC", at least 64% of
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 that are advertised on Youtube are sold in 2 month period.
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products
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 through a
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, the majority of
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 purchase the advertised
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 out of their desire.
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. Recently, a psychology test has been run on a girl to detect her brain when purchasing something, surprisingly, 89% of the brain system will easily be distracted by attractive
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 without
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the
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 primary purpose of what the purchase is for. In conclusion, it is undeniable that great advertising will promote a higher profit
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 the companies.
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 but
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 need to reconsider properly when they want to buy them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer behavior
  • perceived needs
  • emotional appeal
  • brand image
  • marketing strategies
  • materialistic values
  • consumerism
  • manipulative tactics
  • endorsements
  • celebrity marketing
  • promotional tools
  • status symbols
  • luxury
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