In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployement will cause to the individual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.

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looking it so tough to find occupations.
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societies. There are some reasons why these problems
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and two solutions which can be used to deal with these matters. Most
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youngsters feel that they choose their major incorrectly. Due to lack of
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them find it difficult to deal with a proper occupation.
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students
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reason why fresh-graduated
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be able to utilize to tackle these problems. The fresh graduate students, perhaps, should take special qualification courses or
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needed to get an occupation. Some
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might offer several jobs which simply meet
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counselling
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uncertain circumstances.
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from the university counsellor might help. In
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program which has been picked by the youth and their mental
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bother them to make a decision,
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any
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, it would be the best
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to cope with these situations.
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