In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
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technologies
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are
people
who do not have anything to eat . they are a
can be various reasons for that , like poor Correct article usage
apply
countries
do not have access
to them and they do not have enough money
to buy them. Anyhow these problems can be sold with some steps. I am going to explain the rest below.
On the one hand, only developed countries
have access
to the new technologies
because poor status
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states
don't
have enough knowledge to operate them . 90% of hungry Change the verb form
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people
live in poor states they do not have new technology or good education so they cannot advantage from
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of
things
. For example
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new research, 25% of the Correct article usage
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people
in Kenya died due to the food store shortage . other
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things
is
they do not have enough Correct subject-verb agreement
are
money
to buy advanced things
. They cannot afford that kind of things
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furthermore
, they need sufficient
amount of Add an article
a sufficient
money
to buy things
. other countries
not going to sell their technologies
free
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for free
thus
, poor countries
do not have access
or
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to or
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enough
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enough
money
to develop their agriculture.
on the other hand
, however
governments can help to solve Add a comma
,however
this
problem. they can reduce prices on agricultural items, so even poor people
can buy them. For instance
, cut taxes or introduce new payment methods. they can open some institute/educational centers
for Change the spelling
centres
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farmers
famers
, so they can study new methods and Correct your spelling
farmers
technologies
. When,
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well
educated about Add a missing verb
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that
agriculture, they can easily get Correct determiner usage
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good
harvest. so, they can solve Add an article
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this
problem by giving good education and reducing prices.
In conclusion, most of
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people
in the world still suffer from Add an article
the people
starving
. The reasons can be, limited Replace the word
starvation
access
and insufficient amount of money
. moreover
, it can be sold by educating people
and reducing prices.Submitted by hasitha9610s on
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