More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answers and include examples relevant to your experience.
In recent years, young individuals are more concerned about their looks. wardrobe is the basic commodity of a human. People argue there are bad and good effects of having a new attire. Having up-to-date wearables is not bad, as long as a person can afford to buy them for themselves.
On the one hand, frequent acquiring of a new wardrobe becomes a burden for the
parents
. Children are influenced by the latest trend in fashion through social media, asking their parents
to buy new shirts as a reward for their accomplishments in academics. Nowadays, new clothes
cost too much for parents
who earned only a basic salary. For instance
, my cousin Mark became an honour student, he requested a pair of new clothes
as a reward, and his parents
now worry that they cannot pay for a bill on electricity. Furthermore
, parents
worry about how to budget their income at the end of a month.
On the other hand
, Buying new clothes
can be good for the economy. A company will hire more workers to fabric new clothes
, this
will cause an increase in the employment rate in an ailing industry. For example
, Nike advertises new clothes
every month, and an increase in production means they will accept new workers to make a large number of clothes
. Additionally
, other companies will try to compete and allow new workers to produce a vast amount of products.
In conclusion, acquiring new clothes
can boost self-esteem and make more comfortable to a person, But there are more basic things that need to attend rather than clothing. In my own opinion, having new clothes
is not an important reason why we spend our money, there are many basic needs to attend to, new
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and new
clothes
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite