You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the ahicle explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is to inform you about a problem that I faced during reading one of the articles in your last
issue. Although
it might look like a minor mistake, it would affect your reputation since I know other friends from my region who read your magazine. Let me explain more about it.
The problem is relevant to one of your articles about nationalities who live in middle-east. Even though you explain all regions properly with their language and their origin, it seems you made a few mistakes regarding Iranian nationality. Despite the fact that Iran is placed among various nationalities such
as Turk, Arab and Balouch people, the majority of Iranians speak Persian or Farsi. However
, your writer denoted that the language of the region is Arabic which is right partially but not generally.
As a result
, I would like to bring your attention to this
mistake and ask you to correct the article in the next
issue. Also
, you may need to employ a person from the region who can proofread the contents before being published.
Thanks for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
AmiraliSubmitted by parhaash on
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