Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the reals need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, it is believed that the revenue generated from the goods is because of the advertisements and not of the actual need of the public. I completely agree with

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an important role in individuals' life.

To begin

with, high sales are generated by the company as they target users based on their likeability.

In other words

, an algorithm is used over the internet to track individual attention to certain products and the time they spend on viewing that particular item which they like.

For instance

, companies show advertisements on every link and the web pages they follow which in the end attract the citizens and they end up buying those items.

In addition

to it, deals and offers often attract the attention of people effectively adding more business from the community. In regards to it, glittery ads that

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discounts convince the public to buy more often even if they are not in the need of it. To cite an example

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offers like Buy 1 and Get 3, persuade the community that it's a cost-friendly offer and

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individuals tend to buy even if they require only one item.

Moreover

, companies spend a huge amount of funds on brand promotion and hire celebrities to promote their products to get youngsters' attention. That means, companies pay these celebs so that they can attract their fan base and influence them to purchase the goods even if they don't need them. Particularly,

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product

such

as shoes, and clothes worn by celebrity attracts their fans and they end up buying for a sake of establishing a fashion statement. To conclude,

although

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desire of adults to purchase commodities is not the actual reason

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sales, the advertisements reflect

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the approach to get more sales closures and I completely agree with

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