In the future, nobody will by printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Advancement, day by day technology is processing. The universe of technology is massive and every day, scientists are finding out a new branch of
this
science. So,
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issue is not far from waiting to happen.
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essay wants to take a look at
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approach. On the one hand, the best advantage will be happening is that when people read online
newspaper
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or
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, any trees will not necessary to be cut down to make paper, which is an expensive item.
Accordingly
, the amount of waste is decreasing and with the presence of trees, more oxygen reaches the ground.
Also
causes less damage to the environment.
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, while the printed version of the
last
Oxford dictionary book costs almost 70 dollars, its readers can read the online copy by paying less than 10 dollars to its publisher.
On the contrary
,
this
circumstance
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may cause
problems
for the elderly. because
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more difficult for the elderly to use technology than for the young. But the benefits things it has for
this
category.
For instance
, older people find it
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to read
information
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even from the television due to their eyes are not sufficient enough to read everything from the screen. So, they have to print news or books to
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it even harder if they need to read everything online. Another problem that may occur is that some people
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in
to read
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newspaper
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or
book
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in the traditional way. Others believe that
this
method probably may cause vision
problems
. Overall,
this
occurrence has both advantages and disadvantages.
Significant
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advantage is Jungles will be protecting and it is not necessary to cut the trees,
as a
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less waste is produced but
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the other hand when
this
event happens, if we read books or newspaper, we may face some
problems
such
as the traditional loss of books or physical
problems
such
as poor eyesight.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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