Many people argued the advantages and disadvantages of public transport.
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part
of Change to a plural noun
parts
community
always Correct article usage
the community
question
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questions
against
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apply
the
transportation and blame Correct article usage
apply
for
that particular person or organisation so Change preposition
apply
that
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apply
this
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the advantages and other sides Change the verb form
explains
for
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of
this
statement.
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of all, the government wake up and would do better it
than Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
past, if Change preposition
in the
people
shows
the problem in front of them. Change the verb form
show
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, individuals Fix the agreement mistake
countries
done
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apply
fight
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to fight
as
a result immediately worked on that issue. Correct word choice
and as
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, people
reach at
the office on time due to the good service of it. Change preposition
apply
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research saw that Remove the article
apply
majority
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the majority
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of employee
employee
cannot Fix the agreement mistake
employees
went
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go
at
the workplace on time because of the transportation Change preposition
to
consequently
which impacts on
their salary.
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apply
On the other hand
, some country has not good
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have good
phund
to develop it so they Correct your spelling
fund
are try
to boost their economy. Change the verb form
are trying
for example
, Correct your spelling
underdeveloped
under developed
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underdeveloped
country
would give priority to individuals ,Fix the agreement mistake
countries
as
a result in the future Correct word choice
and as
the
construct Correct your spelling
they
the
good vehicle systems ,Correct article usage
apply
however
nowadays they are Add a comma
,however
focus
on it. Wrong verb form
focused
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, they have to depends
on Change the verb
depend
the
Congress in everything. It is for Correct article usage
apply
people
, who have no bucks to purchase personal vehicles, having little money everyone wants to ride it. for example
, in the
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apply
India
40% of Add a comma
,India
people
chooses the government sector rather than the private as a result
they have to give flooded fun for it.
In conclusion, people
should understand that every time we should not use the
transport. Correct article usage
apply
however
, which is beneficial but
for poor Correct word choice
apply
people
and the law do
not stop them because it belongs to all.Correct subject-verb agreement
does
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