Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

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Dear Neighbours, I am writing

this

to bring your attention to a problem that we are facing in our parking area.

To begin

with, let me share my experience. A few days ago, when I was going to park my vehicle at my usual spot, it was already occupied by an unknown vehicle, which forced me to park my vehicle outside where we do not have enough protection. On another day, there was inaccurate parking, occupying almost two slots per car. In order to overcome these issues, I suggest we should have a plan and we must name our own parking slots.

Moreover

, we must arrange alternative parking for the visitors.

Finally

, I urge we must meet, to discuss

this

in a broad manner, and I hope others might have their own solutions as well. I would appreciate your kind and immediate attention to

this

matter, and I look forward to hearing from you all. Yours sincerely, Supun

Submitted by sprabasara on Thu Aug 18 2022

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

158 words

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