Some people believe that the internet is increasing the gap between the rich and poo, while others argue that it help to reduce the gap. Discuss both views and give your opinion
INTERNET
USAGE HAS BEEN INCREASINGLY PROGRESSING AROUND THE WORLD; Use synonyms
HOWEVER
, SOME THINK THAT IT IS AFFECTING THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN TWO COMMUNITY SECTORS; LESS PRIVILEGE AND MORE PRIVILEGE. Linking Words
THIS
ESSAY WILL DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS.
THE MAIN REASON FOR THE INCREASED Linking Words
GAP
BETWEEN THE RICH AND THE POOR COMMUNITY IS BECAUSE OF THE LEVEL OF INSECURITY. Use synonyms
THIS
IS MAINLY BECAUSE TECHNOLOGY GIVES Linking Words
SOCIETY
ACCESS TO OTHER Use synonyms
PEOPLE
'S LIVES. Use synonyms
FOR INSTANCE
, SOCIAL MEDIA PLATFORMS LIKE FACEBOOK, INSTAGRAM AND TIKTOK. MORE OFTEN THAN NOT SOME Linking Words
PEOPLE
FELT INSECURE IF SOMEONE IS MORE PRIVILEGED THAN THEM. AS A ,RESULT THEY ISOLATE THEMSELVES AND FELT THAT THEY DO NOT BELONG. IN MY OPINION, THE INCREASING Use synonyms
GAP
IN THE Use synonyms
SOCIETY
IS MORE OF A PERSONAL ASPECT WHERE HUMANS WILL BE ABLE TO COPE OVER TIME.
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ON THE CONTRARY
, USING THE Linking Words
INTERNET
CREATES A STATE OF SOCIAL AWARENESS, Use synonyms
THUS
REDUCING THE Linking Words
GAP
AT ALMOST ALL Use synonyms
SOCIETY
LEVELS. IT PROVIDES VITAL INFORMATION ABOUT WEATHER CALAMITIES, HEALTH AND ECONOMIC CRISIS, WHERE THESE DATA TRIGGERS THE COMMUNITY TO WORK HAND IN HAND, HELPING EACH OTHER REGARDLESS OF THEIR STATUS IN LIFE. Use synonyms
FOR EXAMPLE
"COVID PANDEMIC" PAVES THE WAY FOR THE RICH Linking Words
PEOPLE
TO EXTEND HELP TO THEIR LESS FORTUNATE FELLOWMEN AND IN RETURN, THEY EXPRESS THEIR GRATITUDE BY POSTING ONLINE, RESULTING IN MORE PRIVILEGED Use synonyms
PEOPLE
HELPING AND CONTRIBUTING. ALL OF THESE RESULT IN A DECREASED Use synonyms
GAP
BETWEEN THE RICH AND THE POOR. I PERSONALLY BELIEVE THAT USING THE Use synonyms
INTERNET
CREATES MORE UNDERSTANDING RATHER THAN A Use synonyms
GAP
IN THE Use synonyms
SOCIETY
.
TO CONCLUDE, UTILIZING THE Use synonyms
INTERNET
INCREASES THE Use synonyms
GAP
BETWEEN THE RICH AND THE POOR BECAUSE OF PERSONAL INSECURITIES; Use synonyms
HOWEVER
, THE AWARENESS IT CREATES ALLEVIATE WHATEVER THE Linking Words
GAP
IS. IN MY OPINION, THE Use synonyms
INTERNET
REDUCES MORE GAPS IN THE Use synonyms
SOCIETY
AND YIELDS TO A MORE POSITIVE OUTCOME.Use synonyms
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