Some people believe that the internet is increasing the gap between the rich and poo, while others argue that it help to reduce the gap. Discuss both views and give your opinion

INTERNET
USAGE HAS BEEN INCREASINGLY PROGRESSING AROUND THE WORLD;
HOWEVER
, SOME THINK THAT IT IS AFFECTING THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN TWO COMMUNITY SECTORS; LESS PRIVILEGE AND MORE PRIVILEGE.
THIS
ESSAY WILL DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS. THE MAIN REASON FOR THE INCREASED
GAP
BETWEEN THE RICH AND THE POOR COMMUNITY IS BECAUSE OF THE LEVEL OF INSECURITY.
THIS
IS MAINLY BECAUSE TECHNOLOGY GIVES
SOCIETY
ACCESS TO OTHER
PEOPLE
'S LIVES.
FOR INSTANCE
, SOCIAL MEDIA PLATFORMS LIKE FACEBOOK, INSTAGRAM AND TIKTOK. MORE OFTEN THAN NOT SOME
PEOPLE
FELT INSECURE IF SOMEONE IS MORE PRIVILEGED THAN THEM. AS A ,RESULT THEY ISOLATE THEMSELVES AND FELT THAT THEY DO NOT BELONG. IN MY OPINION, THE INCREASING
GAP
IN THE
SOCIETY
IS MORE OF A PERSONAL ASPECT WHERE HUMANS WILL BE ABLE TO COPE OVER TIME. 
ON THE CONTRARY
, USING THE
INTERNET
CREATES A STATE OF SOCIAL AWARENESS,
THUS
REDUCING THE
GAP
AT ALMOST ALL
SOCIETY
LEVELS. IT PROVIDES VITAL INFORMATION ABOUT WEATHER CALAMITIES, HEALTH AND ECONOMIC CRISIS, WHERE THESE DATA TRIGGERS THE COMMUNITY TO WORK HAND IN HAND, HELPING EACH OTHER REGARDLESS OF THEIR STATUS IN LIFE.
FOR EXAMPLE
"COVID PANDEMIC" PAVES THE WAY FOR THE RICH
PEOPLE
TO EXTEND HELP TO THEIR LESS FORTUNATE FELLOWMEN AND IN RETURN, THEY EXPRESS THEIR GRATITUDE BY POSTING ONLINE, RESULTING IN MORE PRIVILEGED
PEOPLE
HELPING AND CONTRIBUTING. ALL OF THESE RESULT IN A DECREASED
GAP
BETWEEN THE RICH AND THE POOR. I PERSONALLY BELIEVE THAT USING THE
INTERNET
CREATES MORE UNDERSTANDING RATHER THAN A
GAP
IN THE
SOCIETY
.  TO CONCLUDE, UTILIZING THE
INTERNET
INCREASES THE
GAP
BETWEEN THE RICH AND THE POOR BECAUSE OF PERSONAL INSECURITIES;
HOWEVER
, THE AWARENESS IT CREATES ALLEVIATE WHATEVER THE
GAP
IS. IN MY OPINION, THE
INTERNET
REDUCES MORE GAPS IN THE
SOCIETY
AND YIELDS TO A MORE POSITIVE OUTCOME.
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