Children are now watching more television than they have ever done before. What are the possible risks and the benefits of this?

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bottom 5 of my

strengths

are leadership, gratitude, social intelligence, spirituality and zest, which are the

strengths

that the leader should possess.

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,

although

those skills are my

weaknesses

, I believe that I am able to develop those skills by

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myself from Maxwell’s idea (2016), which refers to the concept of “The 5 Levels of Leadership” and

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paper, which refers to “9 Ways to Develop Your Leadership Skills”. According to

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Maxwell’s idea, the

first

level

is “Position”-learning by self-discipline-, the

second

level

is “Permission”-building

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in colleagues until he is willing to

work

with

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third

level

is “Production”- knowing how to motivate people to

work

until those

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success-, the fourth

level

is “People Development” -developing people become more leaders-, and the fifth

level

is “Pinnacle” -Creating prestige and gaining acceptance from the results of actions from

level

1-4-. According to Author’s paper, the

first

way to develop your leadership skills is “Practice discipline”, which means having self-discipline,

such

as being punctual on

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. the

second

is “Take on more projects”, which means daring to take more responsibility than assigned. The

third

is “Learn to follow”, which refers to being a good follower. The fourth is “Develop situational awareness”, which refers to the ability to predict future situations. The fifth is “Inspire others”, which means motivating other people to

work

willingly. The sixth is “Keep learning”, which refers to opening your mind to learn new things. The seventh is “Empower your teammate”, which means sharing or empowering your colleagues. The eighth is “Resolve conflicts”, which means resolving interpersonal conflicts. The

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ninth

is “be a discerning listener”, which means being a good listener and accepting

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opinions. In conclusion,

from

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my

strengths

and

weaknesses

assessment,

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me do more research on how to develop my

weaknesses

and realize that I have to improve my

strengths

to become more strengthening. At the same time, I have to be open-minded and ready to develop, improve myself,

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my

weaknesses

in order to become a good quality leader.