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After taking the strength quiz from “VIA Character
Strengths
Survey & Character Reports | VIA Institute”, making me
knows
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the top 5
strengths
of me and
that is
fairness, judgement, forgiveness, humility, and prudence.
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strengths
make me enhance
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leadership skills to me significantly while my 5 bottom
strengths
are leadership, gratitude, social intelligence, spirituality, and zest, considered
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the key skills that any leader should possess.
However
, I believe that I can improve
such
skills by the following My
first
strength is fairness.
For example
, under the evaluation process of the
work
of subordinates, I should consider rewarding or promoting subordinates without prejudices by looking
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evaluating only result from their
work
.
Moreover
, I will provide equal working opportunities to everyone without having
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from subordinates or colleagues. The
second
is judgement.
In other words
, I will make a decision on something based on the
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information not only from the historical data
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but
also
from the future prediction. The
third
is forgiveness. I am willing to forgive others
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their working
mistakes
. At the same time, that person who made
mistakes
must find and tell what the causes and solutions
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those
mistakes
are.
Furthermore
, that person who made
mistakes
should not make
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again. The fourth is humility. I will not brag about my success or award until I can achieve or accomplish those
work
.
Lastly
, the fifth strength is prudence. I must
work
and plan very systematically and carefully.
Furthermore
, I must have vivid goals and not do something unreasonable and futile, and I must think so cautiously before I make decisions on speaking or working.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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