Doctors, Nurses, and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree ?

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are receiving more money than other pivotal

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which have been well-contributed to society

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as teachers,

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which they should be more appreciated for improving their salary. I totally agree with

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statement for some reasons. In recent decades, entertainers and professional

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have been paid

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a great nominal of money even though their

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are not really having a massive impact on society. While people who work in crucial aspects

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as health and education aspect are not paid appropriately

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their job. There are 2 main reasons why

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should obtain more salaries than other

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reason is they are the backbone of a nation,

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, all of them are having great impact to nurture the youngsters for a better

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for the youngster themselves.

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,

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are really needed by citizens to share their knowledge and health. These

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lead citizens to the right path.

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,

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and

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tend to look after folk when they are getting sick and it is really useful for us than artists and professional players.

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have a tendency to bring a country

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a great

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due to they will teach

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nations in school or college. As evidence, Finlandia has given great fees to their

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,

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, and teachers and Finlandia's government thinks that it is an appropriate way for appreciating them. To sum up,

doctors

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,

nurses

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, and

lecturers

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have a massive impact on society than entertainers and

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, and those workers should earn more money than entertainers and

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. I believe that if the government or the employees pay for those

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appropriately,

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world will be better in the

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.