Doctors, Nurses, and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, artists and

athletes

are receiving more money than other pivotal

jobs

which have been well-contributed to society

such

as teachers,

doctors

and

nurses

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which they should be more appreciated for improving their salary. I totally agree with

this

statement for some reasons. In recent decades, entertainers and professional

athletes

have been paid

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a great nominal of money even though their

jobs

are not really having a massive impact on society. While people who work in crucial aspects

such

as health and education aspect are not paid appropriately

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their job. There are 2 main reasons why

doctors

,

nurses

, and

lecturers

should obtain more salaries than other

jobs

. The

first

reason is they are the backbone of a nation,

in other words

, all of them are having great impact to nurture the youngsters for a better

future

, not only for the country's

future

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but

also

for the youngster themselves.

On the other hand

,

doctors

,

nurses

, and

lecturers

are really needed by citizens to share their knowledge and health. These

jobs

lead citizens to the right path.

For instance

,

doctors

and

nurses

tend to look after folk when they are getting sick and it is really useful for us than artists and professional players.

In addition

,

lecturers

have a tendency to bring a country

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a great

future

due to they will teach

future

nations in school or college. As evidence, Finlandia has given great fees to their

doctors

,

nurses

, and teachers and Finlandia's government thinks that it is an appropriate way for appreciating them. To sum up,

doctors

,

nurses

, and

lecturers

have a massive impact on society than entertainers and

athletes

, and those workers should earn more money than entertainers and

athletes

. I believe that if the government or the employees pay for those

jobs

appropriately,

this

world will be better in the

future

.