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You are planning to study abroad. Write a letter of inquiry to • give your brief personal information; •ask for the terms of admission into that university • ask for the possibility of getting a scholarship Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

#study #inquiry #information #•ask #terms #admission #university #possibility #scholarship #addresses
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inquire about
the
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graduate admission into
the
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Queens
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 University. I am a general practitioner working in China. After practising in
this
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 community for 5 years, I realize that I would like to pursue a
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master
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 degree in public
health
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. I want to focus on how to promote public
health
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 as a family physician. The
master
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 of
public
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health
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 curriculum
in
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 Queens University is one of the top-ranking
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programmes
programs
programms
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programs
. I hope to apply for I am wondering whether you could send the terms of admission into the
master
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 of
public
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health
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 programme to me. The listed information
at
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 your website is not complete.
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, I would like to know the requirement for the language test.
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, is there a possibility to apply for a scholarship as
a medical professionals
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 working in another country? I would be grateful
that
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if you could send me the detailed information. I am looking forward to hearing you. I hope to become a future
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master
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 student
in
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the
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Queens
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 University. Yours sincerely, Ada
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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