Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a common observation nowadays that
smaller scale
companies are vanishing and large business corporates are taking their place swiftly.Of course, the reasons for Add a hyphen
smaller-scale
this
situation are multifactorial but as far as the vast number of advantages are concerned, I think that they are being masked behind even larger disadvantages. Down here both pros and cons of the current scenario will be discussed along with
how flaws prevail more than benefits.
The first and foremost drawback is that presence
of already stable bigger tycoons in the industry is making the smaller industry lose its competitiveness and is being compelled to lag behind them. Correct article usage
the presence
Additionally
, the products of the settled company are bound to become a success because of the better marketing strategy and advertisement, while
local businesses would obviously not have such
an enormous budget to do so.To illustrate, Mcdonald's
a renowned international food chain is always preferred Correct your spelling
McDonald's
due to
its big name no matter how better
a local business is performing.Replace the word
well
Hence
, failure could become the fate of the community that wants to become successful in the presence of a larger name. Moreover
, the brands are never cost effective
at all which surely is not fine with the population having average financial conditions.
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cost-effective
On the other hand
, if the benefits of this
process of larger companies engulfing the smaller ones are considered,the availability of good quality products with ease would become common and accessible.Secondly
, multinational associations having exceptionally huge incomes are more vital to the economy of a country. For instance
, Unilever company has a profit of more than the combined profit of four to five local brands here in Pakistan. Therefore
, rightfully owned importance must be enjoyed by the
global brands.
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To conclude
, even if there are positives of the increased number of large businesses merging smaller ones into them in terms of economical
and quality benefits, I still believe that there must be opportunities provided Replace the word
economic
to
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for
the
local companies to flourish so that people who are unable to purchase costly products can manage to buy cheaper ones and more and more people dare to join the industry with less fear of loss.Correct article usage
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