You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

#minutes #neighbours #noise #house #apologise #action

Dear Adam, I am writing

this

letter

to reply to your

complain

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letter

about the loud noise. The dog bark is the cause of the loud noise. The

letter

will provide you with an action that will be taken to prevent the discomfort. The dog is

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adapted

adopted

adapoted

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adopted

from

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red

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the red

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cross,

who

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which

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spent most of his life in a war zone. He is experiencing trauma and

unable

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is unable

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to adjust to the new family environment. From your

letter

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it is understood that you work from home. So, I request you to accept my

apologes

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apologies

apology

for all the trouble we put you through during your meetings. Tomorrow,

first

in the morning, I am taking the dog to a vet. He is going to be given proper treatment and medication. Please be patient for

few

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a few

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more days and all

this

loud noise will be reduced. He deserves our patience because he served

for

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apply

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our nation. I hope you can understand the situation and be kind. Thank you Sincerely, Rishi Jayakumar

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

166 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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