In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, many
people
claim that renting a
home
is considered a meaningless investment in some societies. I think
this
is a positive acceptance and totally agree with your perspective.
This
essay will examine what can be some possible reasons. First of all, many
people
believe that ownership of a
home
is a kind of investment for many
persons
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.
Moreover
, being a hirer and paying a rent cost for a place which will not be yours in the long term is considered
wasting
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a waste of
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money, labour and time.
For instance
, If one person to
continued
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is a renter for another person,
this
cost would not be convertible to a renter.
On the other hand
, paying
to
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the bank for ownership of the
home
can transform
to
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cash at any time.
Secondly
, elderly
people
have experienced that rent costs have been increasing day by day.
In addition
, they have already released that in the future buying a
home
will become impossible with
this
rising rate. Because of rising prices, maintaining a
home
in optimal conditions is becoming increasingly difficult.
For example
, some countries have always
a
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fluctuation in their economy and possessing goods
such
as a
home
is always a logical way
as well as
having a
home
can pass over to other generations. In conclusion, in many countries, many
people
have an awareness of having property and make a strong sense of insurance and adherence. A lot of
people
are convinced by
this
reasonable belief. From my perspective,
this
view always will
keep their
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valid and significant.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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