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Band 3.5

A lot of people find it difficult to write letters and often avoid doing so altogether. letter writing is a dying art. Do you agree with this statement?

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Nowadays many
people
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writing
writting
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letters
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 completely. I agree that
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 skill is gradually disappearing.
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, the effects of digital transformation,
lot
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a lot
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 of processes are disrupted and they become so effective and simple.
People
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 in
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 era work like a machine with less communication because we do not have enough time to write
letters
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 to each other in case we can not reach our KPIs or our businesses’ purposes.
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example
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 in our
business
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 we build a business process management
systems
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system
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 and send the tasks through them to make our work so effective and efficient.
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result
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people
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 become
to
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 busy and they only
to
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send the information to their staff via the platforms so they have to make it brief including
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not
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 each other.
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,
people
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 become
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 to write than in the past because of the smartphone and internet system. When social media systems
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 spread everywhere in
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 world we transform our habits
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 to sharing pictures.
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 still leading the change completely.
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 a survey
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people
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 from BBC it is said that 70% of them only
to
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share images and some
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informal
 sentences, and 30% only write formal
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 their bosses.
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Next
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 reason is that some big organizations
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 on the way to
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developing
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robotic
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,
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and RPM
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that is
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 robotic process management.
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, staff and customers in some companies are reacting with
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 so that
people
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 do not need to
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 to
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the machine
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machine
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machines
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 by saying hello,
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your awfully
,
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 if we do that
some one
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someone
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 look at us so stupid.
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, the
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worst for the
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writing
writting
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 skill is in
schools
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school
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. The children now
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do not care about how to write a letter properly. And other words they depend too much on technology to learn,
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 as laptops,
tablets
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and tablets
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.
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 that
way
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 they can react to each out including their teachers in real-time conversations like talking face to face. To summarize, I think the skill of
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writting
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letters
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are not disappear
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 immediately.
However
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 the
next
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 decade it probably happens because the young generation will lead
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 world and their habits will influence our tools and behaviours.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • art of letter writing
  • digital communication
  • instant messaging
  • social media
  • formal communication
  • informal communication
  • nostalgic
  • personal touch
  • environmental concerns
  • niche skill
  • paperless movement
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