Write a letter to a friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about The promotion The celebration The accommodation

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Hey Henry, How’ve you been? I miss you a lot. So I just got a job promotion in my company

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Saturday. So what happened was that my team leader has recently moved to another department and my boss let my team members vote for the new leader. I heard from my teammates that they voted for me because of my amicable and broad-minded personality. That was very kind of them I had to say Anyway, I am gonna invite my colleagues as well as my family and friends to my

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to celebrate my job promotion. I guess that there will be around fifty to sixty people over there, and I will make sure to prepare some stunning foods and beverages for you and my other guests. I

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wanted to host

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at my place so that it feels more homey and comfy.

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, it was unfortunate that I had to get my house fixed because of gas leaking

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Monday.

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rented a gorgeous decorated room in the central building, which I was very pleased with. I hope that you can make it to my

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, and please DM me if anything suddenly comes up. Cheers, Austin

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

217 words

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