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Men do most of the high level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women ?Give your own opinion.

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In
this
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 modern era, people can not get employed easily,
although
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, in some areas only male workers are employed ,
therefore
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 , the authorised should be encouraging
women
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also
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 for doing a job and they can reserve some place for
women
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 so all females might find jobs.
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 with, the main point is equality both males and females are
similarly
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 important in all sectors.
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 , Indian
women
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 work in many different fields because of the encouragement and policies.
Moreover
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, the government should take care of
women
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 workers in their respective fields , all workers get bonuses equally and
also
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 they get promotions for their hardships. I completely agree with
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 statement because in the present
women
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 can achieve any goals
also
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 according to one survey, more than one-
third
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women
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of women
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 are working in different fields in all over the world so if
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this
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 figures could be increased
then
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 all states publicans take some rules regarding
women
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 sits in jobs because it is
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 profitable for their growth and economy of nations as well. In conclusion , in my opinion , it is very advanced and very necessary to include
women
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 in businesses because it is not only beneficial for companies but
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 for the development of the economy.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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