A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Madam, I am writing

this

letter in response to your recent announcement that you are looking for contributions from your readers for an upcoming article titled "the

book

that influenced me most"

therefore

, I would like to take

this

opportunity and want to share information about the one that has affected me the most. The

book

is titled "YOU CAN WIN " written by Mr Shiv Khera.

This

is a storehouse of inspiration and motivation toward achieving goals and success in

life

;

in addition

, it is a tool that contains extremely effective and useful steps to follow a successful and rewarding

life

. After reading It my perspective on

life

and everything related has entirely transformed. I managed to overcome procrastination which was the major obstacle for me toward achieving

life

goals.

Moreover

this

has helped me to lead a happy and successful

life

. Without a

doubt

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the most influential

book

which has done wonders for me and will definitely do for others whosoever will read it. I hope you will take

this

book

into consideration for your article. Looking forward to a positive reply. Yours faithfully. Komal Handa

Submitted by komalhanda1990 on Fri Aug 19 2022

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