In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
In
this
century, it is a popular trend for teenagers to be willing to go to work or go on a journey for a certain time before attending tertiary Linking Words
education
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This
essay will say that earning Linking Words
money
and getting mature have many benefits but pursuing Use synonyms
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instead
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and reducing motivation to study have many drawbacks.
The main advantages of saving Use synonyms
money
by doing work can afford to buy their basic needs and to study at good universities as self-funded students. Use synonyms
For instance
, some students are not able to go to top-ranking universities because of their financial situation as well as some are not rich kids because they came from middle-class and grass-root families. Linking Words
Moreover
, walking or travelling for a year for young people will become mature ones. Linking Words
As a result
, they will get a lot of experience and knowledge in their future career and survival skills as the way they know very well how to deal and communicate with people in their society.
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some disadvantages. The Linking Words
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one is a complement Linking Words
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third
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education
that will be delayed or discontinued because adults are pressured by Use synonyms
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of an institution. Linking Words
For example
, most billionaires never finished their university like Bill gates, KFC owners and so on. Linking Words
In addition
, lack of motivation to study cannot be a graduate one and get a white collar job or a reason why is most of the great successful people who are politicians, scientists, lawyers, doubters finished and graduated from tertiary Linking Words
education
.
In conclusion, taking a break from studies can get positive outcomes if they can manage themselves for their future prospect by earning Use synonyms
money
or learning more about the world. Use synonyms
However
, it should make sense to get a higher degree from a university .without pursuing Linking Words
money
all the time.Use synonyms
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