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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvatages?

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The table illustrates the popularity of activities among people without permanent work in the UK, while all information is summarised according to their sex and time. Overall, it is clear from the table graph that men and women prefer absolutely different kinds of activities and
also
 the choice of what they do depends on part of the day. The majority of women do some housework in both morning and afternoon. Mornings
this
 rate is a bit under 50%,
however
, in the afternoon it reaches only the point of 21%. Astonishingly, the least attractive hobbies for women are playing sports and drinking, as they reach 0-1%. At the same time, a multitude of males spends free time in the morning hunting job or doing shopping, it is 20% and 22% of men correspondingly.
Nevertheless
, the most popular activities in the afternoon are watching TV, gardening, visiting friends or job hunting, all of them are scored between 12% and 14%.
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