Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter,  - invite him or her to a public event in your country   - describe the public event   - explain other plans you have for your friend when he or she visits.

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Dear Sarah, Hope you are doing fine since we

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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

met a few months ago in London. I am penning down

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letter to invite you to an event happening

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summer in Canada. Light festival is back

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summer in Toronto from May 12th to 15th. It is a 4-day event where artists from all over the world are showcasing their talent in various forms of light structures. During my visit to London

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year, we discussed

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and I remember how amused you were and how badly you wanted to visit, in spite of no visa. Along with lights, there will be a lot of food and drinks for you to taste. On the

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day of the festival , there will be a barbeque where folks can cook their own food. In fact, you love cooking and I am pretty sure that you would definitely enjoy

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, after the festival, I planned a road trip to Alberta where you can see picturesque locations and magnificent fields throughout the trip. I would like you to meet my friends and they want to cook you traditional Canadian cuisine. We will make all arrangements as per your liking. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Lots of love, Priya

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

211 words

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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter, - invite him or her to a public event in your country - describe the public event - explain other plans you have for your friend when he or she visits.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

Some parents believe that their children should do extra-curricular activities after school. Others say in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere, this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money- making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter,  - invite him or her to a public event in your country   - describe the public event   - explain other plans you have for your friend when he or she visits.