Should students be allowed to play PUBG? State your own opinion.

Without any doubt,society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people.In
this
contemporary era ,
games
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become
important
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part of
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lives.
This
essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but
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point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion. To commence with,
games
help the individual to reduce
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stress and give relief to their mind.To cite an example,if a learner
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by the stress of study they can reduce
this
burden by playing the game of
pubg
.
In addition
,they can play
this
game with their friends and at one time four friends can play together.
On the other hand
,it
also
has some demerits,while playing the
pubg
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pub
for
longer
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time a student can not focus on
there
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studies
and their grades start decreasing downwards.
For instance
,if a learner plays
pubg
for longer hours there is a change in their behaviour and they
also
shout too loud while playing the
games
.
However
, it is dangerous for the children and most of them play the BGMI very seriously and
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debate
their focus from
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studies
. Having discussed both the arguments,I personally infer that
student
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students
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should play the
pubg
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pub
for half an in a day to reduce the
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stress
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stress
related to their
studies
.
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this
way they can focus more on their
studies
.
This
will help them to mushroom their grades and become successful in their life. In a nutshell,different people have
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point
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of
views
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.
Games
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is
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a
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enjoyful
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joyful
moment as students forget
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all problem for some period of time.But they should understand that study is more important than playing
pubg
as it can have
bad
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impact on their upcoming future.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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