A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

Tourism

takes a significant place to contribute

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the nation's

budgetary

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also

has some flaws, the benefits seemingly prevail

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drawbacks.

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society into both pros and cons.

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both of them and will be completed with a logical conclusion. The main essence and foremost reason why

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provides advantages

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that

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tourism

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potential to elevate the country's income. Due to the increasing

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vast

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number

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foreign and local visitors, They would invest their money to indulge

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themselves

theirselves

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themselves

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for

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in

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several places

such

as monuments, ancient temples, natural attractions and even some amusements.

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, eventually, will support and enhance the country's

financial

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.

Secondly

, the

number

of

unemployee

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unemployed

citizens will gradually decline,

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a wide range of employment that had been provided . As

result

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of

broad

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range of job

vaccancy

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vacancy

available, the needs of hospitality occupations

such

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us

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hotel clerks, restaurant

staffs

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and tour

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guides

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guiders

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would be broadly open.

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, it is a positive sign of national

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well-being

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well-beings

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.

Otherwise

,

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trend perhaps will lead

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massive

desruption

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disruption

to the ancient buildings. Several traditional constructions are

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to cope with

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numerous amount of

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tourists. A

number

of visitors would be overloaded and caused a crowded situation

then

some part of the traditional constructions might be ruined.

Moreover

, criminal actions usually happen during the busy crowded people at the attraction places.

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would make the other visitors feel

unoleasant

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unpleasant

pleasant

. Even though,

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case can be tackled by developing

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good-management

tourism

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shopisticated

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sophisticated

tourism

cause some disadvantages, it yields more benefits for the

nation

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finance and

provide

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societies with a huge

number

of occupations. I truly believe that

tourism

will bring considerable merits than

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flaws.