Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extend do you agree or disagree?

When it comes to
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, some people think everybody, regardless of gender, should have the same chance to educate in every
subject
. But most
of
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the
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people think
this
point of view isn’t realistic.
Firstly
, all over the
world
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there are some jobs which, most
of
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the
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men
and
women
think, are for one gender.
For example
; a few
number of
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women
are willing to work in the mines, and seeing a man as a
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babysitter
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baby-sitter
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or kindergarten teacher is
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weird
wierd
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weird
! So, some job opportunities are more suitable for just one gender. If the universities accept the same
number
of both genders in some subjects, there may be
men
and
women
who didn’t have the chance to study the
subject
they want. The other problem is that, in most
of
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countries and cultures,
men
are the breadwinners and
women
are the ones who manage the house. Thereby, the
number
of
men
who need
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job
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jobs
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and academic education is usually more than
women
. Giving
men
and
women
the same opportunity
in
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educating
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, deprives some
men
to have
a
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of
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job
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in future. In conclusion, I think giving both genders the same chance to study
in
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every
subject
in universities is not fair. There should be a true ratio in the
number
of
men
and
women
accepted in every
subject
, based on the statistics about each gender’s desires.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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