You live in a block of flats, your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: • explain the situation • tell him/her how you are affected by this • Suggest what you want the landlord to do.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to explain about my problems that I have
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from you . I have been living in block 2
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2 years , we used to
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calm space with my neighbour but
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family moved to my
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very noisy.
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play music at midnight and sometimes watch movies loudly,
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time
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them to avoid making noise but they keep doing the same. As you know I have 2 children that they go to school early and when Mr jame make noise , they can not sleep
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, I have
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from their teachers. In fact ,
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would like to ask you to explain the situation to Mr
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James
and notice them
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of our laws about having
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place to live . I look forward
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your prompt attention regarding
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