Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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Nowadays,
people
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prefer to have private
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and it has been increasing rapidly over the past thirty years,
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big traffic
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are being created. In my opinion, it is true for some reasons. Namely, having private
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is more comfortable, and companies which produce
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encourage
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to buy their products.
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, the government can do some
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to solve
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concern and it will be discussed in
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essay. Recently, for many reasons,
individuals
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tend to
car
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ownership and it causes traffic
jam
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jams
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.
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and foremost, there is not sufficient public transportation and everyone who wants to use them has to wait in a long queue.
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,
people
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prefer to buy a
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, because it is more
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convenient
convinient
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convenient
. Based on a study that was done by Tehran University, the most important encouraging factor for buying
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car
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a car
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is the lack of public transportation.
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but not least, these days companies generate
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variety of
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with a number of options and prices, so
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can purchase one of them. Indeed, the government can carry out some corrective actions to decrease the
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of
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to
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ownership.
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, they should expand public transportation.
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, the number of buses should be enhanced, and the underground train system must be developed.
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, they should consider a
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specific
specefic
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specific
line on
streets
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for riding
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a bicycle
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bicycle
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, so
individuals
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use their bikes for going to work. Statistics show that
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many humans go to work by their automobiles
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because they can not utilize their
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bicycles
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in crowded streets. In conclusion, despite
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fact many
individuals
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have private
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, they will not use their
cars
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if there are some better choices for their commutes.
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, the
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government
can persuade them to
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not utilize their
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by creating new facilities for them.
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