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“some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids”. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often believed by a large section of society that
childcare
 institutions provide
best
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 service for
pupils
 of age 2 to 5 years. While,
on the other hand
,many individuals think that their own family members
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will
wil
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will
 take
care
them
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of them
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 better than any others. In my opinion,the
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grandparents
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grand parents
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grandparents
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 or family members can take
care
 of children in
very
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 good way. In upcoming paragraphs,the advantages of both will be discussed To commence with,In the
childcare
centres
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 it is the responsibility of the workers who are working
their
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there
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,that how to take
care
 of children. A major benefit of
childcare
 centre is that many of the trainers have a lot of experience and they have
a
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good training.
Moreover
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childcare
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center
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 a child got a good environment as there are many more
pupils
are
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there so that child
become
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 more friendly with them. On the flip side, Grandparents
also
 take
care
children
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 in a very good way. As they
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do not
don't
donot
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do not
 have pressure or tension of anything so that they can take
care
 of their child with a free mind.
In addition
 to
it
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 Grandparents can
also
taught
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teach
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 so many other activities and can
also
 tell them Many folks.
Furthermore
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 they can make them understand some new skills which develop their thinking power .
Besides
this
 Grandparents make the body of
pupils
 fit and more energetic by providing them good diet in their personal guidance To conclude, I opine that
childcare
 institutions and
enlightenment
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 of family members
has
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 their own up and downs. It is the experience of elders that
make
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 the skills of
pupils
 wide
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